Constellation(nonet)

by PS   Apr 2, 2006


Whenever i look to the night sky
i see your guiding sparks of light
points that speak of a hunter
harassed by a barbed bug
for ever more years
lighting the sky
orion:
my dear
stars

-a nonet
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  • 18 years ago

    by Roopa

    Wow! ur poems are so good. i need to start working on mine!

  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Simple but stunning could be tweeked in places but I liked it!!

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Nicely done Poonam, well penned!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by pseudo

    Good job with this poem.. Interesting topic.. I dont normally read nature poem but I liked this one. Good Structure! Just work on your flow ;)other than that good job keep it up.. you have a lot of potential! =)

    --emotionless.19*

  • 18 years ago

    by glass*wall*prison

    Seemed to have just random stuff thrown in ...good work can be improved

    good write 4/5

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