A cold and rainy night

by Andrea broken tears   Apr 4, 2006


A rainy night
its cold outside
I'm trying to stay awake.
I sit by the window
staring at the falling
rain.
Cars are passing bye
as I look to the sky.
I think of you
I think of us
but it still don't help
the rain.
My heart feels no pain
but thoughts of us
drive me insane.
Pouring rain
following each drop
down the window pane.
Get a whiff of you
almost feel your touch
but I only hear the rain.
I'm calm
with feelings so strong.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Just Me

    Hey its cool were thinking of the same things... i think. Lol this is just odd... well if it were me I wouldn't do it but the question is, do you want to and will u be safe? If you can't trust him then dont do it and if he wont be safe then u really better not do it but I trust u will be so the thing is do u want to... for u not to satisfy him? oh nice poem by the way lol!

  • 18 years ago

    by alive in death

    Hey now i get that it's just about the day... and how it made you feel...
    i love the weather.... especially the rain it can provoke so many deep, sad emotions...

    and btw are you checking your emails? i sent you an email... and i didnt hear back from you...
    oh well peace,
    phil (wench)

  • 18 years ago

    by alive in death

    Makes me wonder.... hmmm you got me thinking. i wish i knew the story behind this... i dont know how to say anything with this one because it just kinda... drifts off..... all i can say is that it makes me feel once again... such a peace...i dont know why i feel that way whenever i read your thoughts.... it just happens i guess...
    i guess everything didnt go the way you wanted it too... i hope you get what you want eventually...
    phil

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