Shattered Heart (Choka)

Sad, yet beautiful. the last two stanzas are overpowering.

peace
shobhana

I love this poem, maybe because i can relate to the pain discribed in your poem. lovely choice of words and an excellent flow. :) X

I really liked this poem becuz as i read on I felt like you were writing a short poem aboutmy life...well mybe not directly from my life...but most of us have been thete before...i know i have a couple times...
The only comfort that can be gained is that time will heal these wounds.
Beside you deserve way better than that anyways!

Wow, Simon! This is heartbreaking!
"But please do me this
Take with you this shattered heart
Dispose of it how you will"
^^^ I love this stanza, excellent writing!

Wow, I've never seen this form of poetry before and I must say, I loved it! So touching, a wonderful write ^_^