Comments : Feed My Desire

  • 15 years ago

    by â—ŠJâ—Š

    That's so sweet...beautiful poem...5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    ......................my, my, my.............................

  • 15 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darling beautifully w0rded. a t0uching piece i dun0 y its been v0ted s0 l0w. this was really g0od, keep it up. great use 0f w0rds

    l0ve fr0m
    d0ra

  • So lovely yet beautiful penned............

  • 15 years ago

    by Cuddles

    If I had a dollar for every poem of yours that I fell in love with...

    Absolutely beautiful!

    Give me wings of love to make me fly
    Let me soar above higher and higher
    Show me heaven here on earth
    Come on closer and feed my desire

    I love that stanza! Brilliant!!

    love and best wishes,
    Mary

  • 15 years ago

    by Renee Kotva

    This is a touching one-again. It says it all.

    lots of love and
    god bless

  • 15 years ago

    by Ali

    Wow what a lovely poem!!!! you're a real inspiration to me!!!

    I love reading your poems!

    5/5 for sure

    Thanks for your comments!!!!!
    I will try to come up with more

    Ali

  • 15 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Kiss me now till I feel you in my blood
    Give me the sensation found so rare
    Drown me in your eyes till I cant rise above
    Show me how much you can love and care

    Give me wings of love to make me fly
    Let me soar above higher and higher
    Show me heaven here on earth
    Come on closer and feed my desire

    this one is a greedy poem of your's sweety...lol...lol, and i just loved it. Great poem all the way through.

    would love to be a part of your journey to fantasy land.. :o))

    all the best and take care

  • 15 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Congratulations for reaching the top so soon dear, time has come again but then who counts..huh!!! lol

    take care

  • 15 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    Wut a sweet poem pictured love desired in every line with such melody i can fly.
    love

  • 15 years ago

    by LiL K

    Wow...I'm really impressed with this poem! I love your descriptions and the way your feelings show through. A lot of people can relate to this and know exactly how you feel.

    If you could, check out my poem 'Your Love' and r/r/c...I'd greatly appreciate it!

    Thanks
    ~Kelly~

  • 15 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Wow! that was lovely. it carries so many feelings.....
    keep it up! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    I love this poem and its conept, flow, decription- love it

  • 15 years ago

    by red

    I really love it.there is so much emotion check ours out

  • 15 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderful, Enjoyed the write Michelle, lovely and romantic!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by simply taylor

    That poem is so cute!! i really liked it! 5/5 for sure! thanx again for commenting on mine. it means a lot to get comments on something you write.

  • 15 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Lovely Michelle. this one is filled with passion and so much warmth.

    well done!

    love and peace
    shobhana

  • 15 years ago

    by William Woodrow

    I love it....I always enjoy your writting. You are one of my top favorites and I look forward to reading more.