Good Idea, Bad Idea

by 2die4   Apr 6, 2006


It was a good idea that we played leaped frog
But it was a bad idea to play it with a unicorn
It was a good thing we know how to whistle
But it was a bad thing that we whistle with out mouthful
It was a good idea to play tag
But it was a bad idea that we played in the woods blindfolded
It was a good thing that we played outside
But the bad thing was that it rain acid
It was a good thing that it snowed
But the bad thing was that its all ashes
Good thing we ran away from the stranger
Bad thing was that we ran to his house and hide inside, now I'm stuck with your writing this poem

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  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Hahaha thats a very great and talented poem :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Brigitte

    This poem is very unique! And i loved how you wrote it. You changed tences a couple time thought, somtimes you were in past tence and then changed to preasent.

    But it was a bad thing that we whistle with out mouthful
    ^^ don't you mean Our insted of out?

    Other than that keep writting, I'll definatly read more of your work!