Silence(Rictameter)

by PS   Apr 6, 2006


Silence
harsh and awkward
spans between us forever
why can't i find a word to say
anything that will make you laugh and smile
but no, alone i sit here to
feel the hot burn of your
waiting eyes in
silence

rictameter

(expentant eyes
calling- ignore this, its for me)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    I love it. its very good.

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Cute Poem! Very nice read.

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    This is a great write... Though I would consider changing line 6 by swapping our "in silence" with something different. Perhaps something like:

    "But no, I sit patiently and"

    Just a thought. I really enjoyed the poem though, it has a magnificent feel to it and I can almost feel the burning sensation of those eyes. Incredible.

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