Oh my gosh! that is such an incredible poem. i am actually quite speechless. there is so much truth behind it. i dont think iv read a poem that has put life's journey in to such a perfect idea. great work 5/5. xx

Wow, this poem in beyond amazing. You took a simple idea and created a thoughtful piece of work. I've got to say though, you have a very unique style of writing. Random yet effective. Great poem, especially the ending. Keep up the awesome work! 5/5

~Luvz~
~Angie~
xoxo

Awesome. its different and well written. obviously thought about. amazing!

Nice job on this poem! I love how your poems are so easy to understand..keep it up!

This was good. I liked it how you used life as a train basically. Great idea =]
But this was done really well I think. It wasn't too short, But it wasnt too long. It was just perfect. Keep it up 5/5

`natalie

Wow even this poem seems fast, short lines and freeverse work with the idea of the runaway train, not thought out but just how they are
INcredible :)

Good poem

That was very good! Thank you for your honest comments..I completely agree with you on both of them!! I will make them better when I cant...thanks again!!

Such a unique poem! It really makes me want to start thinking over where I'm going in life! I printed it out and it's actually taped to my wall of faverote poems! Speaking of faverotes you made ym faverotes list :) lol

Much love
Brigitte

Wow, you did an unbelievable job explaining this and creating the amount of imagery in the space provieded. Brilliantly penned. And thanx for ur comment on my poem, it meant a lot, i didn't quite like the flow, but glad you did. Keep up the good work 5/5 :)
-Jenna xo

Another strong ending to the poem, i havent come across a poem that talks about life like this. very unique.

That's a very true poem. Or at least I say it is. I really enjoyed it and I thought it was good. However...I thought this last Stanza was the best.
"The sole choice,
Between the train and the tracks,
Continue in this existence,
Or leave it all behind,
To live on here,
Or to die. "