My life

by xXxAngelEyes007xXx   Apr 7, 2006


My life is tough
I've had enough
I hate this life
I'll use my knife
my life isn't any fun
perhaps a gun
I have no hope
I'll try a rope
right now i sit
my life in a pit
my life is tough
I've had enough
it's hard to give
with the ways i live
i cannot stand
please take my hand
before i jump
hit a bump
please take the pain
so i can gain
in my life
without the knife
take my pain
help me gain
before i take my life
with this shining knife

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  • 18 years ago

    by Fredy

    Now this is a good poem. great work.

  • 19 years ago

    by Mycquel

    That was a good poem! I just hope that this is just a poem and not how you truely feel..nothing is worth takin your own life!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Mycquel

    That was a good poem! I just hope that this is just a poem and not how you truely feel..nothing is worth takin your own life!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Manda

    OMFG MARIE THIS IS TOTALY AWSOME!!!!
    Manda

  • 19 years ago

    by katrina porter

    Wow this is good and sad at the same time keep up the good work ok pal

    Jenna 5/5

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