Linger On

by Always4You   Apr 9, 2006


~Tell me what you think...Comments would be greatly appreciated..Thanks!~

I know what you\'re thinking
Way before you say a word
Your sweet, silent thoughts
Never go unheard

I can finish your sentence
Before your lips part
I can feel what you feel
Even though we\'re apart

You\'re going to miss me
I can feel it deep down
You say nothing at all
I can tell by your frown

Your pain is mine
I feel the same way
I long to be with you too
Each and every day

Two souls, connected as one
Our hearts mended together
Though distance separates us
I will be with you forever

Locked deep inside your body
There I will always dwell
Not just in heart and mind
But every single cell

Your want is my want
Your aim is my aim
Whatever you desire
I need the same

When I part from you
My love will linger on
Just like the dew on the grass
When night turns to dawn

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~ICanOnlyImagine~

    When I part from you
    My love will linger on
    Just like the dew on the grass
    When night turns to dawn

    Great job! Again you have such a way of words..chow! :D

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Your detail in this was amazing
    Great Job..
    Terrifically written
    Excellent rhymes
    Good Flow
    all around great poem
    5/5
    ~TPOMH~

  • 18 years ago

    by LOVEmeNOT

    Dat was gud!..I loved it...5/5

    x3Melissa

  • 18 years ago

    by ღHazel_Kittenღ

    Wow that was reallly good I wish I could write like this. Good rhyming and perfet word usage. It was really good 5/5 for u chicka :D

    Lataz
    |MIA|