Oh my gosh, ok whatever under disguse sed is so so true.... even i cud read it 4eva n neva get sick of it...n i knw how u feel...n im sorry i feel dis way....da guy is suck a ****...love u babe
love dia mwaz xoxo

I did spelling error oops its ment to say n im osrry u feel dis way,lol soz

Hey hunnie that was so great you can write so much that means something so sad but yet its feelings! ur great hun keep up ur hard work! luv shakira x

Well done babe=) a really honest poem, please keep writing and don't hurt urself ok xxx
Damionxxx

Brilliantly written, smooth flow and well constructed. Very expressive and powerful too.

5/5

LOVED IT! ! ! your a great poet i especially liked the 3rd stanza but altogether everything went perfectly good job 5/5

That was a great poem, keep up the good work
You ahve me inspired!

Awww, sweetie!!! That's a really depressing poem! Well written, but oh, so sad. It makes me scared. If you ever need anyone to talk to, know that I am here for you, just don't do anything stupid!

Love always,
~BJ~

Ok tiger... glad to see you really alive..otherwise you would be wasting such awesome talent. Def struck a cord!! Keep it coming..its great!!

Sammib

I really like this.
The ending kind of clashes well with the body.
Very well written. Deff 5/5

Wow i love it i can relate to sum of the things u have written .....it so sad i love it .....i think i have already sed the owel

cas x x x

You read my mind , you must have a crystal ball, keep it up that was great

This is an outstanding poem, obviously sad, but extremely well written!! i totally felt every word. Keep up the good work!!

5/5

This is an outstanding poem, obviously sad, but extremely well written!! i totally felt every word. Keep up the good work!!

5/5