It Was All About You!!!

by Rose   Apr 10, 2006


The feelings i have being, lost, betrayed
The love we have now, is no longer the love made
How dare you walk in and trample my pride
How dare you vow to stand by my side

I gave you my all and endeavoring love
I supported the vow, when the going got tough
How could you not be there when i needed your all
How could you just stand and watch me fall

Your selfishness took what love was once strong
Your words would become a played out love song
Don't give me your sorries and say that you care
Don't give me your love when its no longer there

How could you once love, then turn to stone
And leave me feeling lost and alone
Yes, my heart loves you, and will always do
But no, i don't need you nor what you've put me through!!!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Daydreamerr

    This is a really beautifull poem
    I feel your anger and your pain

    Good job!

  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie

    I really loved this one!! Fav lines:
    "Yes, my heart loves you, and will always do
    But no, i don't need you nor what you've put me through!!!"

    In this poem, You put your feelings right out there. And it was very easy to understand. Great job! 5/5

    luv natalie x-x

  • 19 years ago

    by PS

    I esp love:
    How could you once love, then turn to stone
    And leave me feeling lost and alone

    besides that i love the the couplets at teh end of the stanzas. very nice. :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Wow great job^^ i also love the lines that Kat mentioned .. it reminds me alot of my parents.. i guess.. excellent job 5/5 keep it up

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 19 years ago

    by Danielle

    My sentiments exactly!

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