SO DEEP..................
I don't know what else to say... I mean, you have started to write so well about the pain in love... It's just toooo good.. keep it up. .really it was just awesome..
5.5
Much Love,
Ipsita

Love gives us many happiness as well as pain. very well written 5/5 it is a breathtaking poem

keep it up
sonam

This is great how you set this poem out, and protrayed it well done xox me

Hell0o that was really t0uchng and very heartfelt piece. greatuse 0f w0rds =]

l0ve fr0m
d0ra

Omg, soo good.

in love's misconception
crippled within myself
awaiting salvation

I loved those lines! oh nad also thegun part, brilliant. hehe all the lines are great. and different pattern, very nice.

Amazing job, I love the wording you have used, def another 5 vote and I have added you to my fav's sarah x

Wow, this poem was so touching, I can definetly feel the pain you describe so well in this poem. Keep writting.

and thankyou for the sweet words on my poem too.
god bless
renee

This poem is absolutely fantastic!!! Love the title, love the concept, love each and every line, love the loneliness and the feelings put in to it, loved every single thing about it. Do I need to say anything else to make you believe how much I love it? I think not. lol....

Sorry for commenting on it so late, but its better late than never right? :-)

Love
Michelle

Oh wow!! So beautiful. Love is painful. (Believe me I know.) Wonderfully portayed.

Dry eyes evade me after reading!

"another tomorrow
another deception
with same mirror
and a dying reflection"
i loved that part so much

but i also loved the rest of the poem as well
oooo man it was soo good, and the ending was so pwoerful
loved it loved it loved it

Fantastic Nitin. great flow, great rhyme and powerful play of emotions.

wonderful seeing your poems consistently hit the top!

good luck
shobhana

This one made me speechless!

Aw woooow
wut a beautiful poem
I luved it absolutely..ur work is amazing!!!!!
keep it up huni
Luv Yaaaa
NemO xxxxxxxx*than-Q for ur sweet comments*

Wow every word has a strength even the simplest. i love you poems and will remin reading them for u inspire me in so many ways.thx dear

best of luck

Wow! A veerry heart-felt poem..full of emotion and really powerful! I loved it!

"another tomorrow
another deception
with same mirror
and a dying reflection
craving for a smile
in love's misconception
crippled within myself
awaiting salvation"

I love these lines..they flow so well and mean so much! 5/5

~Kelly~

Check out some of my featured poems if you haven't already..I'd greatly appreciate it! Thanks

Wow...

I love this poem a lot...you are a talented poet....oh and you mentioned something about my contest"make it sound beautiful" There is nothing reserved no more so go ahead and enter.

A very good poem. I liked the concept. Well done!

It was good but i felt like i didn't understand what it really meant. Like yeah, it was about a breakup, but then it mentioned alot about rainbows and horizons and it really didn't fit in with the whole subject of the stiory. But it flowed really well. The only thing i didn't get was what i mentioned but other than that i'll give it a 4.-YMSM