You had me at hello.

by simone   Apr 11, 2006


Will you build me a sandcastle?
Would you do that for me?
Would you hold me tight?
As tender as can be.

I would love to watch the sunset,
With your arms around me tight.
Until the day has dawned,
The sky turns into night.

You gave me a dozen yellow roses.
They were straight from your heart
To me they are so touching,
The best way for love to start.

Why am I so lucky?
Do I deserve someone so true?
For I have found an angel,
For there was standing you.

I want to get to know you,
Cant wait for the day.
When I get to kiss you,
And maybe get to say.

Id like to start a new life,
With you to be apart.
As you are so special
You have already touched my heart.

When that day does come,
And I am holding you so.
As you got my attention,
You had me at hello.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Erikah

    That was sooo good! i loved every bit of it. I liked that u had a rhyming scheme and you made me feel what u felt...That was great!