Beautifully written and i enjoyed it very much.

Oh my gosh totally amazing

Woah deep...and confusing...
WD XD

I LOVE IT,LOVE IT, LOVE IT,LOVE IT,ECT.

Soo good. amazing, fantastic. i love the end. fantastical!

Yeah, very good, very well written and i loved it
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I LOVED the last line, great work on this poem. I think this is one of your best! It flowed and rhymed so well, it was flawless.

Good job

--Steph

Wow!! I read it twice. It's deep!! It made me think!! Great work!! 5/5

A very deep poem which provokes a lot of thought, nicely written and very imaginative.

-biscuit-

Very good.. Really deep.. Flowed really well.. keep writing!

I loved the soul meaning of this poem! I didn't care all that much for the rhyming, I think you could have done better without it. All in all, It was really well penned. 4/5

Alesia