Shallow Grave (re-done)

Circled above head
Is the moon and stars
Sitting in my yard
Emotionally scarred.
The wounds are deep
But not as deep as
My heart ache
hoping for a never ending sleep.
The ground is shallow
Drinking in my dripping blood.
Splatter on my skirt
Bloches of blood
In puddles of my hurt.
The pain has faded now,
So is my eyesight
Maybe with luck
I'll die tonight.
I cut again
Yet
Deeper this time
A sharper pain
That cut teh thoughts from my mind.
I feel a rush
The blood falling quicker,
Making my stomach heavy and sicker.
Finally my eyes get heavy,
Waiting till I die,
just to end the pain
to go off somewhere where i wont cry.
The night sky becomes darker,
and I become weaker,
as i finally begin to walk the road
with the Grim Reaper.