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by mala   Apr 14, 2006


Find out

When u find out what I do u will regret ever doing what u did I cried I suffered I was blue so that is how it was. you tried telling me I am sorry fro hurting u but u did it so when I levee I know u will regret what u did

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  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie

    This is sad. Maybe try expanding it a bit, So then the reader understand what actually happend. And maybe if you put them into stanza's, Like this:
    "When You find out,
    What I do.
    You will regret ever doing,
    What you did."

    Just thought i'd try and help a bit =]
    It was good though, You had your feelings in there, And i liked that =]

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