Lost
by mala Apr 14, 2006
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I am lost in life tears come down my face 4 one reason saddness4 love getting lost in love I am lost in my own hart don’t know how or what to do now so all I do is bring out my razor to take this empty felling out of my hart it takes it out for a moment then it comes back the next day later |
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19 years ago
by Natalie
Okay, Just like the other one. This was really good. But it would be easier to read in stanza's. Or atleast some comma's or full stops. But don't worry, This is a great peice, Just need to fix it up a tad. Keep it up hun, Take care x-x
