Say Goodbye

by Lucy Lewin   Apr 14, 2006


This isn't really a poem... it's more like thoughts and feelings.

It's over.
It's done.
No more smiles.
No more memories.
Just tears and pain.
Just emptiness and sorrow.

It's hard to move on,
Knowing that it's time.
It's way too soon,
to say goodbye.

There you go,
you're just walking away.
I'm falling fast.
I'm slipping away.
Now you're gone,
I've lost my chance.

I don't want to say goodbye.

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  • 18 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Yeah I agree with Syanne a poem doesn't have to rhyme for it to convey meaning...your's did very well at that

    great job!

    sorry it has to be soo sad...=[

    amanda

  • 18 years ago

    by Likke.a.demon!

    It is a poem.
    Just cause you don't rhyme doesnt make it not a poem.
    I loooved it.
    The words mixed well together :]

    5/5

    x3