That's It

by enfant du tordu chagrin   Apr 17, 2006


That's it, it's over, no more games
My will is broken, soul is maimed
I've shattered into a million shards
My healing wasn't on the cards

That's it, I'm broken, an empty husk
No more hope and no more trust
Empty of all, I cannot feel
My life's a dream, so unreal

That's it, I've tried, it wasn't smart
And you can't stop me falling apart
The process started, it won't stop
I've hit bottom, such weight on top

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Its good, and i liked it. But it ended abruptively and that made it seem less well flowed, but it was good.
    xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    This was good. The ending really brought the poem together! Awesome job! 5/5

    `taleee xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Eraklis

    I try and write work like this, short but strong enough to carry through pages.
    Let me just say your talent is amazing If I haven't mentioned it before.

  • 18 years ago

    by jello

    This is good...i like the flow. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Great peice, well written wth a good flow. the length is short yet it easly contains as much as some of the longer poems upon this site.

    5/5

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