Even from the start*

by Bran   Apr 18, 2006


You cant change her mind
she thinks that its all true
she slit her wrists
once then twice
and thats all that she could ever do

i try to tell her how much i care
peoples love you
& and they are not worth the scars you wear.
but you cant change the mind of determined heart.

because they are broken
even from the start.

dedicated to Julia

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tiffaney

    Hey
    I know how hard it is to try and help a friend away from making those scars on the wrists and how much it hurts you to see them doing it to themself...i went through that for many years with one of my friends and it was so hard to see her doing this stuff to herself and i had no idea what to say to her because all i wanted her to do was get better and stop hurtting herself because i new she was going to end up in the hospital or that she would end up dieing.
    But yeah if you ever need to talk i am here for yeah.
    Keep up the good work hun.

  • 18 years ago

    by Someone special..

    Hey,

    This is really good powerful stuff especially the ending, broken from the start. That cool! Thanks for commenting on my poem, much appreciated.

    Keep Writing!