Though I Died.

by anonymous   Apr 19, 2006


He above has chosen me,
it is my time to leave.
but i want you to smile,
and not to cry please.

For now I'm with the angels,
and I'm watching from the sky.
but please do not be sad
i do not want to see you cry.

i was just not strong enough,
i weakened and gave up the fight
but it didn't mean i didn't love you
i just would never be alright

now i am truly smiling
yes, I'm watching you from above,
I'm send out my hug and kisses
I'm shouting out my love

this is your final time with me,
come and whisper your goodbyes
but please try and smile
i don't want our last memories to be your softened cries

I'm sorry for what pain Ive caused
but i know it was for the best
now i can finally be happy
and now I'm finally at rest

so this will be my last words spoken
and i don't want to see you cry
keep on living in your wonderful lives
the world didn't stop, though i died.

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  • 16 years ago

    by xXxBrOkEnAnGeLxXx

    That was deep. i loved it, this poem realli stands out for me because somebody i loved committed suicide...
    5/5 girl great job
    check some of mine out if you get a chance x

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Geez i thot ur post said u were bad now..u r so not! that was gr8 it had emotion and detail! 5/5!
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 18 years ago

    by azlan26

    This poem was a little odd at some places, one line was really long and stands out quite badly
    It may look neater if you capitalised the "i"s in the poien (as in "I am doing...")
    The lines don't always flow too good, if you could find a count then it may help
    The content of the poem was great, it was really sad and quite touching...the use of crying always works :D...if you can get the flow right it would be even better
    Again another excellent poem

  • 18 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    This is really sad, but sweet and good.... keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Amberinaa

    Wonderful!.. Gave me chills. 5/5

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