Let Us Be Free (about 2 ppl who commit suicide)

by RockPixie   Apr 19, 2006


We both decided to end it together.
All we could think of was the sooner the better.
cause we couldn't take all the shit we'd been through,
we would end it in grace, now that dream came true.

We searched for solutions but couldn't find one.
We were getting into problems and you bought a gun.
But I never wanted a bullet in my brains.
I just wanted to be free from this chains.

And so we we're trying the best way we could.
But the end; it was coming, death was good.
We made our decision & drove to the cliffs by the sea,
we heard the waves crash down, we felt so free.

We danced on the edge and closed our eyes,
we were escaped from the world an all its lies.
You whispered let the last thing that I see be your sweet face,
before death gives me its black embrace.'

In your eyes I could see reflections of pain.
From forgotten times only the memories remain.
But now I'm here to take your hand,
we'll jump on tree, on my command...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Sweet!!! Love ur Poem!!! Keep it Up!!! Stop by and comment my poems....if u have time!

  • 18 years ago

    by dee

    I really liked it. i love how it tells a story and yet youve managed to make it rhyme. that takes skiiiilll haha
    keep it going
    dee

  • 18 years ago

    by my_little_secret

    Really lovely, but obcviously sad at the time...bittersweetin fact. good work xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Psymon

    Having read your quotes as well and re-reading this I understood it more, and I like it a lot... I gave all your quotes 5 except for the last one which didn't come on to me... ah well...

    love and light :-))