This Feeling

by KJ   Apr 20, 2006


This feeling cannot be explained.
This feeling is out of this world, I could almost faint.
It starts from my head, and ends at the bottom of my toes.
As she nibbles my earlobes, my eyes slowly close.
My body is quivering, and my hands are sweaty.
This feeling that I am feeling, makes me feel like I am finally ready.
Ready to explore this new and precious experience.
An experience that could change everything, starting with my appearance.
As all these thoughts are running through my mind,
She slowly takes my hands into hers, and they intertwine.
This feeling is beautiful.
As my body climaxes, my toes start to curl like curly fries.
It feels so right to be staring into her mysterious hazel eyes.
After this new and precious experience, we lie in bed, her arms are wrapped tightly around me.
I feel like I am safe, from my head to my feet.
I pray that this feeling will never leave.
But I know that this feeling that I am feeling will only return in my dreams.

*PaSsIoNaTe kIsSeS*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hidden1

    WOW!!!! Why is it that we have the most memorable experiences in our dreams and will our dreams ever become a reality. Well written and I love the flow of this. Excellent job and keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kenny

    You held me in a moment with you...thank you!

    How are your dreams?

    K~

  • 18 years ago

    by *-*PoisonedSoul~_~

    Good poem 5/5,
    but love is the expierience that destroyed me... unfortunatley i like the new me better. im tougher, u know, dont let relationships make me cry... sometimes! :D

  • 18 years ago

    by Diana C

    The poems is so beautiful.
    And it gave me flash backs, is true that it feels so good, is true that dreams come true. To be whit that person you love, and have the words to explain why of does dreams.
    Beautiful.

  • 18 years ago

    by S R P

    Good job at expressing those feelings. I really liked it. :-) 5/5