Good poem. It has a good structure and great diction. What movie is this from? It sounds very good. Keep up the good work.

I love this poem...it creates a sense of lonliness after love...the free form is great...everything feels empty and lonely

Very nice imagery and word choice. An overall sensation that is peaceful and mysterious. I already commented on your other poem.

Wonderful words!! They are simply mesmerising. A thoroughly enjoyable read.

Amazing.. I loved the last three lines.. very deep.. nice job

Another great poem! I love how you use your words and how powerful they can be to the reader! Keep them coming!! 5/5

Thats amazing. i did say i was going to try to give constructive comments, but i cantos think of anything to say...

maybe, some lines were overwhelming, because all the words used were pretty long. all i can think of, but i tryied

Ruby

Beautiful descriptions, great poem, really!

Beutiful i dont know what else to say, i'm serious, this was such a good poem i especially liked this stanza:
Breathing your aroma, sweet
bouquet flowers seasonal for eternity.
Washing lies from flesh touched
with hands, cleansing struggling sins.

brilliant :) keep writing kaylee :)

~StefQ

Awesome use of words. this poem is lovely. Its awesome
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Wow this is a great poem! so much brilliant language describing beautiful images, very well written and very deep. really beautiful. xx

Im usually a fan of strictly rhyming, but i think you made me a new fan of your descriptive writing style... i also like the forbidden love part; i always thought that was romantic. anyways, because i liked the scenery, and it flowed nicely, 5/5

This is beautiful, Kaylee! The imagery is so wonderful. Awesome write!

The words you used in this poem were just amazing! You have a very impressive vocabulary, which makes the poem more impressive then it already is. 5/5

The ending was phenomenal. At times the use of verbs were a bit overcrowed and the momentum was lost through a few unconnected words...however the emjambment carried it through and I adore the title you used.

[lostlaureate - come find me]

I really think this is a really good poem.It's has that feeling when you read it, i wish i can explain it but its hard for me to do that.Anyways good job!

Excellently written . . . again. The imagery you use is amazingly clear and crisp in my mind. The last line is also really powerful . . very effective.

Peace. [Sole]

Nice write!!! i like it!! very well done!! nice way to put all the feelings in words!! if only we could forget!!??!!??

Beautiful write... I'm really at a loss for words right now.
5/5
As always~ Kate

I love it! It's so meaningful. I love the way it was a short poem, but it said ALOT! I love it! Great job and keep up the good work. Read mine... It's not done, but I think it will be a great start... Suggestions would be nice..