Last Dance

by PS   Apr 24, 2006


The ground shakes beneath the feet
of the girls and boys as they meet
on the wood dance floor divine
Im gonna make this last dance mine

the end of hard work and four long years
the finish line of our high school careers
we all gather one last time
to dance and sing songs of rhyme

you and me its almost over
frankly its been quite a blur
so clap your hands for our future success
and hope to god we won't make a mess

on the dance floor with all of you
our final dance sadly it is true
all you people that Ill never see
I hope that youll also miss me

life is over yet still beginning
cmon now lets all loudly sing
doesnt matter if you werent a friend
lets make this the happiest end

lets dance the last dance tonight
and show our love in all its might
feel that beat; fall into a trance
because this is our last dance

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  • 17 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Beautifully written. Really nice take on the subject, reads nicely.. good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Wow...excellent. words can't describe how touching this poem is. i especially liked this part.
    "lets dance the last dance tonight
    and show our love in all its might
    feel that beat; fall into a trance
    because this is our last dance"
    great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Nicely done..watch out for puntuation in areas but a very simplistic rhyme which works well.

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Beautifully done, I love the flow to this poem... Your words are sincere and heartfelt, nice work! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Strong message from the beginning to end. Yiu have beautifully described how I felt when I was finishing school.
    Wonderful flow and beautiful write!