by patrick Apr 25, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
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There was a man who loved life like a man loves his wife |
by gfds
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That poem was..so sad! so you say it's based on a true story?!? if i was in a situation like that i don't know what i would do!!! i almsot cried! Awesome poem!!! |
by Tormented
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GREAT POEM, one of the best ones i've ever read. well done. its tooo good |
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Whoa that was really good, and really sad... nice job |
by Becca
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WOW! |
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This was fairly decent, but you should think about changing the structure of the poem.. maybe some more organized stanzas? |