I really liked this one. It flowed rather nicely and alot of the lines made an impact on me. Great Job!

Sorry U had to end it like that... but don't take it to hard on yourself will ya...

Good poem by the way

Tim

Here it is hard to tell whether you lost your love for him, or whether you were unfaithful to him, but either way it seems like he still would love you. I don't know the situation, but if it hurts you so much to break up then maybe the problem is worth working out? Just a thought, but maybe I am not making any sense as is often the case. I hope things turn out okay for you, you deserve to have relationship you can charish and feel comfortable it. Hugs!

-Tainted

Aw hun sorry about that*hugz*
hope you're okay..you shud know tht you're a real gr8 person I respect you and the way to treat your friends..so sweet ;)
Hope this turns to be Okay!
Luv Ya (Lucky charm) =P
NemO XxXxXxXxXxXxX

Aww did yu break up? im sorry babe but dont put urself down like this!!!

Awe what a sad poem =*(

So beautifully written with so many emotions and feelings.

It's a wonderfull piece and so touching.

Hun I'm so sorry but that's all I can say, it just left me speechless *hugs*

Lotsaaa love
-xxx-

Anna,

Sweetie never regret life little lessons, it's not your fault your heart didnt measure up to what he and your expected, im glad you listened to it and didnt drag it out as most people would have. I love you dearly pookie....-did i just say pookie???????-, and never worry ill always be here for you =)

jenn

ps if all else fails you can be my gf -lol kidding im striaght-

Wow, a very heartfelt poem. Lovely!!! Keep it up. Its the hardest thing to do, and you wrote about it so amazingly. Great work.

Love
Michelle

I sat here, reading this and i swear, my ears? perked up. My mouth? dropped open and i sat up straighter.

I'm the same!! I don't understand it either. It's like i fall for ones who are either out of my league, are complete shits, or are so nice and would make me happy, i kill the realationship or just don't like them anymore.
It's like gaaaah! You can see it and know it will happen but pray it will be different. But it never is. *huffs* Life n Love eh?

Still, amazing poem {if you din't gather that from the jaw dropage} :D

xxx