Suicide Letter

by Thesoftdarkness   Apr 26, 2006


Mommy,Daddy,

I must go,
For i have nothing left to show,
I wasted your life,
So i took mine with this knife,
Happiness wasn't there,
I lost my ability to care,
I lost my ability to resist the pain,
I lost my ability to admire the rain,
I lost faith in me,
I lost my compassions to be free,
You lost faith in me too,
Don't deny it-I know it's true,
I'm sorry i was such a waste,
but now, blood is all i taste,
Thanks for your hate,
because it bought me to this fate...

-the unwanted Daughter

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  • 18 years ago

    by dee

    Hey your poem was really good. i like the way it flowed and expressed how you felt.
    dee

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Aw this is sad. Good though. I do think it could get deeper. I have a poem called "Suicide Note" You can read it if you want, You don't need to comment or nothing. It just might show you an idea of what I mean by making it deeper. Anywho, Great job though, && I hope things are alright! 5/5

    `natalie xx

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