Unsatisfied with me.

by Thesoftdarkness   Jan 24, 2006


I\'ve tried and tried,
to become what you wanted,
all the nights i\'ve cried,

i\'ll never amount to what you expect,
i do all these things that should make you vain of me,
but all you do is suspect

you imply i need to change,
my whole entire personality,
and get a better one in exchange.

i\'ve tried to be what you\'ve wanted,
but now i\'ve done it for too long,
i\'m leaving, im finished being taunted.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Milton

    Someone who tells you what to do like that isn't worth love. This one was sad, and sounded hard. Good stuff

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Nice poem..i loved it..i love your rhythm and rhyming words...nice job 5/5 and thank you so much for your comment on my poem..i appreciated it....ttyl sometime
    PeAcE
    ~The Poet~