Because She Cut Too Deep

by Megan   Apr 26, 2006


Silent days
And reckless nights
All her life is
Is one huge fight.

Bloodstained dreams
And endless sleep
All because
She cut too deep.

Upset friends
All crying to God
"Bring her back,
Give her another shot."

Razor sharp knives
Slide across there wrists
They want to be with her
So they will not miss.

8 teens dead
Within a week
All because
She cut too deep.

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  • 18 years ago

    by gasping for air

    Wow! that ending was really powerful hun, thats what got you the five in my book... you just put that element of surprise that was needed in there!! you've got real talent and keep it going!!!
    great job
    amanda and baby

  • 18 years ago

    by ShatteredGirl

    Loved it. it was realy good :-)

  • 18 years ago

    by MaGs

    Omgosh! i luv it!! really good! keep writing!

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