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I love your poem, easy to relate to, and a fairly good flow to it.
Great job 5/5

You're young and I know with the times it's probably cool and even practical to type "U" instead of "you". However, in the poetry world it's not and should not be accepted. I think typing everything correctly shows you have pride in yourself and in your heart. This piece was well written but the "U" and mispelled words make it sloppy which in turn can break away an audience. I'm not saying anything to get your upset but taking a couple extra minutes to review you're writing and to make sure everything is correct could really show a difference in YOU and YOUR WRITING. Nice poem all in all. :)

And a word of advice from a girl who fell in love at 15. Don't stick around to find out what happens next. Let it go. The arguements are now, tomorrow, and forever. Once the love has gone sour it's HARD to get it back. I wish you well though! Just be careful and remember...LIVE A LITTLE!!! ;)

Very nice poem, and your question on how to know if you were excepted in a club, on the right it says poerty club if it says that you are active member than you are in. Don't wait too long though, anything pass 3 days usually means you were not excepted, if you need to ask anything else leave me a comment, okay, hope this helps.

Thanks for your comment on my poem, it means a lot to me, i also really like this poem of yours...through all the fights eventually you will see the light and know which way to choose, you'll know when it happens, check out my other poems too!