Becoming broken

by Ashley   Apr 28, 2006


In al the years,
That you have been calling me
your special butterfly
You thaught me many things..
Some wise, some foolish

You showed me what to do
to bring colour in my wings,
But then you turned around and left me
Taking al my colours with you.

you taught me to keep up my protective wall,
By using my wings
But then you broke them both..
Causing my downfall..

The moment you sayd goodbye
I became different,
Without my father,
Without wings..
Without colour
You made me turn into a broken butterfly.

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  • 18 years ago

    by No one

    That's really sad, although its not your best work, but i still think its good. 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by norman

    I gave you a 3 sory its not that great but it the best i got for you untill you work on this a little bit my advise to you is to make it a little less wordy but ill keep an eye on you