Synonyms.

by Ashley   Nov 16, 2006


A ripped t-shirt,
Ready to be thrown out.
Glasses without glass,
Too damaged to be used.
A room with no light
ready to get lost in
A candle all burned down,
Too useless to keep.
A computer without internet,
useless nowadays.
A well without water,
Completely empty.
An uncomplete puzzle,
with holes in it.
A rundown house,
Too dangerous to enter.

All synonyms,
But the best synonym of all is a scratched cd.
because even now,
after all this time,
everytime I see, hear or think about you,

My heart skips a beat.

Please read my work and let me know what you think. The favor will be returned.

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  • 16 years ago

    by GretaInsideOut

    Hey, You commented me AGES ago, I haven't been on in ages! I like this one, its a talent you certainly have,
    Awesome work
    Greta

  • 16 years ago

    by LossxOfxControl

    Wow, I really liked this, it was really amazing how well it was written. (Not that your not good or anything lol) And I can relate to so much too, and the last verse was really good.

    'But the best synonym of all is a scratched cd.
    because even now,
    after all this time,
    everytime I see, hear or think about you,
    My heart skips a beat.'

    Amazing, really. Keep it up!