This is really good. I can definitely relate to it! My Favorite stanza was:
My black tears,
Are something I keep to myself,
I don't let you see that it kills me,
Every time I think of you.
I love the overall meaning of the poem..it is very deep & emotional. Great job! 5/5**

Thats deep, good poem.

Very deep. I think you should move the sections closer to each other though - there's no need for the gaps between each. The imagery was well written - quite striking, and the picture of somebody crying black tears is very powerful in my mind. Nicely done.

Peace. [Sole]

It was a reall deep piece of writing. its pretty powerful. the only thing id suggest is the flow to improve. it didnt quite flow. I thought it was a very strong and powerful piece of writing though. well done.

Kat

Good peice, the flow wasn't consistant thoughout but was smooth for the most part at least. The content is defantly the best part, i mean the structure was good but the content really well thought though and portrayed. the descriptions and imegry are good and the overall peice very deep and powerful.

5/5

The concent is good but the poem in itself was a bit repetitive. THe imagery was fantastic but the flow felt off.All you need is maybe tweak it here and there to send a stronger message :)

Hey I was the 100th visitor, cool...*ahem* anyway. I really loved this poem, I know precisely how you feel, just because of how wonderfully expressive this poem is. The use of slanted rhyme gives it a great flow, "I don't let you see that it kills me,
Every time I think of you" Really beautiful 5/5

Wow.. i loved this i thought it showed great imagination for the colors and flavors.. i loved this line

Every tear has a color and a flavor,
^^ i would have never thought of that excellent work 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

I can relate a lot to this poem! It had a lot of emotion in it. Very deep and powerful. I loved it! Great job! 5/5

My favorite part was:

Every tear has a color and a flavor,
My tears are black,
They taste blank and alone,
You just don't understand,

Good write. If I may suggest, I personally may add a bit more punch to that last stanza so it reads like this...

You caused these tears...
These tears of pain and loneliness,
These tears that are blank and tasteless.
You... caused these black tears.

Of course... that's just my opinion. Good write though... keep up the good work. 5/5

That is a very sad poem. I kinda liked it i'm not really a big fan of sad poems anymore even though i wrote to many before. But anyways i think you did an amazing job and i love how each tear is a different color and it tastes different. amazing job.

keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

That is a very sad poem. I kinda liked it i'm not really a big fan of sad poems anymore even though i wrote to many before. But anyways i think you did an amazing job and i love how each tear is a different color and it tastes different. amazing job.

keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

Ooops!! i'm sorry i didnt mean to put two comments my computer is being stupid..

I thought you could add a little more detail to this poem. But I also did like it the way it is. I can relate alot too. I try not to let anyone see the tears that I cry. I thought you expressed your emotions pretty well in this. Keep it up!! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Really good.. very nice ending i thought.. keep up the good work!....
5/5!
lindsay

A well written dark poem that could release in me as much emotion as dark tears

Sad, but a nice poem... I know where you're coming from. I can relate. Really nice. If you wanna read any of my poems, i would love it if you could read these...

Plucked Daisy
Sun and Rain
Mirror Mirror on the Wall

thanks so much! great job 5/5

Hey, great poem. It didnt rhyme but it was still good to read, it was dark and kinda scary, i loved it.

Great work

--Steph

It is a very sad poem but the way it is written complements it brilliantly it dosen't need to rhyme because it's just about true emotions. A great poem in my view

Nice job