Oppsites

by Raychel   Apr 30, 2006


You found my weaknesses,
and changed them to be my strengths,
you found my love,
and changed it to hate.

You found my unwounded arms,
and made me cause self-harm,
you saw my dry face,
and made me cry myself into a miserable place.

you discovered my secrets,
you made them public,
you saw me with a new love,
and you forced me into lonliness.

you remembered the way to change me,
what you called fixing,
is what really hurt me,
and now im the opposite of what i should be.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    Nvr commented this??

    weird, cuz i love it.

    L.O.V.E.

    so yeahhh, im prettyyy much gonna say terrific and i secind what tripp said about the flow of that specific stanza.

    and my fav is the last two lines....

  • 16 years ago

    by Fallen Angel

    Gd

  • 17 years ago

    by Love Panda

    WOW!!! this poem sounded exactly like a part of my life once, now i know that horrible stuff doesnt just happen to one person.

    excellent

    october xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Megg

    Stop makin me cry u and heidi both

  • 17 years ago

    by bleed4eternity

    I liked the structure and how the meaning of the poem wasnt sacificed for rhyme.

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