And We Dance...

by Void   Apr 30, 2006


Stars of imagination, being reborn above
As the moonlight shines, where we will dance...To celebrate our love.

We sway in the winds,
And float atop clouds.
Only one heart beat heard,
It's our heartbeat now.
Caressing you tightly, embraced is your soul,
For it's yours that has always kept my own whole.

The smell, the warmth, the strength of your touch
(but even your strength, is delicate enough.)
A beauty so faithfully stuck in love's grasp
I pray to Forever, 'make tonight last'
But Forever replies, with memories reflection
As I remember that this, is imagination's deception.

So breathe in slowly,
And I'll open these eyes.
I'll breathe in slowly,
I don't want to cry.

Stars of imagination, will soon decay.
But under the moonlight, is where we'll stay.
This dream may be over, but love is our chance,
For in my heart forever, is where, together, we'll dance.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Polaroid

    Its very happy compared to your other ones... i like how you can write about opposite emotions, thats a great quality for a writer to have. so great job on that.

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    I'm literally speechless...you are such and amazing poet. And I love how you personify Forever as though it were a person you could plea with. Truly, amazing. Keep it up!
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    A tad confusing towards the ending, as to whether it happened or not, and the way you typed it out was a bit confusing too, but still I found that I really enjoyed this poem. It is beautiful. And I love how you "prayed" to forever. I love the imagery you create in your work!
    #2 comment
    Charisma*
    P.S. The numbers help me keep up with it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    Great range of words and i loved the 2nd stanza. it was very good. and the idea was creative. i really like the emotion u pour into it. and the ending was bold. no complaints here. i usually dont go for love poems in terms of reading them and taking time to comment, they all sound the same to me. but urs is an exception. congrats, it earned my kudos.
    love ya lots,
    sore

  • 17 years ago

    by blueknight

    Know what I fount out that you are a very good poet and when i read this one it make me feel great coz i found another great poet in this site, and I really like this all the words you put and the flow was great excellent job

    Geneross

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