Darkness

by Gilligan   May 1, 2006


I look in the mirror,
I see it shimmer,
I have the knife,
Which will bring strife,
To my wrists and to my throat,
As I slit,
I call my self a silly git,
For living this long,
I must of been an idiot,
I hear a song,
Blood falling on the floor,
I'm dying,
And for once I feel I've done something right.
Deep in the night,
Everything goes dark,
All I hear is a dog's bark,
Then nothing

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  • 18 years ago

    by Gilligan

    Oh Im not offended matt
    pffft
    It's your own opinion and i dont care what that would be
    I dont like it jamie, YOU SEE EVIL!
    FIGHT FIGHT!!!!!!
    ~Em

  • 18 years ago

    by Grotesque Angel

    Hey Jamie,

    I can see your writing style is similar to that of Emmas. But you can tell your a bit more articulate in your wording (no offence Emma).
    Great work pal :P

    Matt
    PS: Suzie why the Japanese????

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Freaky. i'd be very worried if ur title didn't suggets sanity. plz, be happy: )
    ttyl Jamie-san

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