Pain

by Derek   May 2, 2006


Pain
looks like a sorrow filled face
smells like tears dripping in a pound
feels like your in a dark place and no ones around to help you
tests like sourer milk
sounds like screams from a distraught child
pain

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  • 17 years ago

    by mo_gan

    Thats really sad=( But I love it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ

    Short but very deep...i loved it...and its very true...keep writing like this...

    ~Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ~

  • 17 years ago

    by *completly_in_love*

    I liked this one a lot! so short but so awesome.

  • 17 years ago

    by *completly_in_love*

    I liked this one a lot! so short but so awesome.

  • 18 years ago

    by NothingGoldCanStay

    Wow... i loved it. it really expressed your emotion about pain.. keep writing!

    XxXNothing-Gold-Can-StayXxX

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