Suicide does not pay

by Derek   Apr 2, 2006


One day a happy go lucky boy thought that Friday would be a good day. He was hoping his dad wouldnâ??t drink while he was at work. Thought out the day it was good he got to play on the computer and do all sorts of things while his parents were at work and sister was at her house sleeping. She was supposed to come over at 10:30 a.m. but didnâ??t get there till around 12:00 p.m. She did bring Burger King for lunch. So far the day was good from there too. It was bad after he forgot to give the dogs a bath. Then after that it was good until 6:30 p.m., thatâ??s when his things went really bad. He over heard his parents fighting. They were fighting about his did drinking. The boy hated them fighting because at always seemed to hurt his mom a lot and he couldnâ??t help but cry when his mom cried. So he couldnâ??t take seeing his mom cry so he went up in his room and wrote a note that said

â??Dear whoever reads this

Hi,
I am going to make this short so. I have tried not to do this for a long time but I just canâ??t take it anymore. I am sorry for what I am about to do.

The happy go lucky boy found a knife that he had in his room so if anyone came in that wasnâ??t suppose to he could use it to defend himself. So he walked over to his bed and lay down. Pulled the covers over his head. Then prayed and slowly cut this wrist crossed his wrist not down his wrist. He started to scream but he held it in because he didnâ??t want his parents to see what he did till it was to late and so he tried to make it look like he was asleep be for he cut his wrist. While he was lying there waiting for death to take him he forgot all his memories and pain. A while later his mom called him to see if he wanted to go to the store but he didnâ??t answer so she went up into his room and saw that it was a mess in his room so didnâ??t see any blood from the wrist that he had cut but toys garbage was all around so she was going to tell him to clean it. She saw him under the covers so she thought that he was sleeping and so she didnâ??t try to awake him up and on the way down she didnâ??t notice the note he left about his suicide. The next day she called him for school but there was no answer again so she went up there to wake him up. When she pulled the covers off she gasped for air and ran down stairs to call the cops and the wind from her run down blow the note down and she found it before she called the cops and read it then she called the cops and told them about the note and the suicide note and they said they would send the cops and an ambulance to take him away. When they got there they found his mom lying over hers sons limp dead body crying they saw the note in her hands and asked why her thought that her son committed suicide and so she told them and they still investigated it and went to his school and asked his friends if they knew why he would commit suicide and they didnâ??t know any reasons why. So the cops arrested his mom and said that it was staged by her and put her on trial for the death of her son but she wasnâ??t convicted. Her husband left her and took the kids with her. She took her stuff and her deceased sons stuff and got an apartment and that day made a with draw of $1,000 to pay for what she was going to do and committed suicide the same way her son did. That was the end of her and her sons life.

So people that read this think about how this is going to affect the people around you and thatâ??s all I really want to tell you guys and girls I hoped you liked the story and will not commit suicide because no matter what people some were in some place love you and donâ??t want you to die.

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  • 17 years ago

    by *completly_in_love*

    I liked that story/poem it was really good.

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany

    Dude, thats good that u wont commit suicide....cuz then we would all miss ya at school.
    Brittany

  • 18 years ago

    by Derek

    Thanxs