Life, no more

by FrozenTearsBleed   May 4, 2006


Though time has marked me with its knife,
I shall miss this lonly life.

I close my eyes and take in the air,
No one is this world even gives a care.

Iâm a life that is a waste of time,
This world is like a mountain that I cannot climb.

Do you get me, do you know my pain,
If you say yes then Iâll go insane.

Because no one knows the pain I hold,
I feal like my heart has been taken and sold.

But no, no one even looks at me,
Thats because they dont want to see.

The truth that lies in my face,
My heart begins to run its race.

It pounds so hard I can feal it inside,
I cry the tears that I try to hide.

Yet they seem to fall with every move,
And you voice just doesnt soothe.

Its overr know let me alone,
Give this poor girl you call a dog her last bone.

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  • 17 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Has alot of potential, would do better if you gave more thought to the last stanza. again, might wanna fix the spelling of "feel"

  • 17 years ago

    by devintwinkletoes

    That's really good. A few parts are a little cofusing because of grammar. But it's still good! *thumbs up*