Endless Life

Whoaaaaaaa.
I really liked this poem, it's a new format, I've never seen anything like it.

And you went against something I usually see, instead of making a statement, as your last line, you asked a question.

Great work, this is a really good poem.

Once again, I liked the style you used in it.

Whoa. This was surely different. I loved the composition and the way you constructed it, because I haven't really seen many layed out that way. I liked the flow and the questioning you put in it. And... the last line? Loved it. Keep writing!