Party

by MidNightBeauty   May 5, 2006


I went to the party mom
Even though you said i shouldn't
I tell you how much it means to me
So you say okay have a good time
Just please dont drink and drive
I nodded and went off
I get to the party
And some friends offer me some alcohol
I say no ill have a coke instead
Party ends so i call you on my cell phone saying
*Its half past twelve mom im on my way home*
Then i hang up the phone
Now im driving 55
And a drunk driver hits me
Now im lying in my own blood
I hear the people talking mom
But they sound so far away
And im so scared mom
Is this what i get when i dont drink and drive
I can hear the paramedics now mom
they are saying this girls going to die
Final words so long and good-bye

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  • 17 years ago

    by Roxy

    Wow!! thats deep its happend to many in this world ( i call it hell LOL) nice poem you made the reader seem like it was happening to them
    xoxroxyxox

  • 17 years ago

    by Roxy

    Wow!! thats deep its happend to many in this world ( i call it hell LOL) nice poem you made the reader seem like it was happening to them
    xoxroxyxox

  • 17 years ago

    by Ellie

    ^^ I fully with Stanzi, its a very good poem. Contnue to write so we can enjoy =P

  • 17 years ago

    by Stazifer Stazington

    That was....BEAUTIFUL!!! *tear* Im serious! That was like totally deeeeep! My friend went through that but she's still alive. Ilike it, and how your poems identify with the public.