Beautifully written, the flow was perfect! great imagry and word usage, loved it!

You really capture the essence of 'daydreaming' here. I like the type of words that you've used, because they are different to what I normally read. I don't think you needed to add rhyme in here because the poem flows fluidly without it. That being said the rhyme does not detract from it because it sounds natural and not forced. This was a really 'dreamy' read, very picturesque :)

That was very beautiful! I loved the flow of it! Very good! 5/5

Amazing poem, great flow
it is really nice to read poems like that
seriously, keep that good work;)

Nicely done. Good flow and rhythm with nice imagery. Keep up the good work and keep writing. 5/5

I seldom have time for daydreaming, but as I read your poem it created the relaxed calm feeling I have when daydreaming, it was a very cool effect. Some times we all just need to stop and have a little "me" time. Great poem.

-Tainted

Beautiful, i enjoyed it alot. Very good flow, just a lovely, soothing poem. Over all, very good

Wow! that was beautifully written! i love this bit best!

Each life has a path
Each day has a place
Each smile brings in joy
Across a longing face
And through and through life
I flow like a stream
Tranquil in my mind
Thus...a wonderous dream

itz just so beautiful! with GREAT imagery!
jessy

That poem...was amazing. its the best "happy" poem that i've ever read. this is just...wow. just beautiful

Ok...Amazing Job...capturing the mood...I loved it...everything went together so well...nice job...
Emma 5/5

That was beautiful!! great job hun!!

I saw this link on the discussion board and had to read it, since I am a daydreamer myself, this was so eloquent in its beauty, an absolute joy to read. You are very talented and I loved it. Timothy r

FABULOUS, as usual. good job. you rock, noni.

I loved your profile where it said.."don`t cry for someone who wouldn`t cry for you"..that my dear was brilliant! About this poem, it was really fantastic, my fave line was "Time seemed to drift on its wandering feet"..I loved this poem very much, keep up the excellent work. Timothy r

Beautifully writtten very descriptive i really enjoyed it

keep the talent keep the faith keep the ability to write beautifully

laura

O0o i love it...very powerfull werds!!!

Beautiful language, another great poem! I'd love to see you publised some day!

Keep up the great work!!

I flow like a stream
Tranquil in my mind
Thus...a wonderous dream
^^^^^my favorite part^^^
Your poem was beutifuL! I could SEE everything the poem described! Very inspirational. ;)

"The silence of the air
Soothes my tender ear
Brings gleeful tidings
Almost too much to bare"
This stanza has a different rhyme scheme compared to the other quatrains. The others are ABCB and this one is ABCA. bare rhymes with air, not ear, if i'm not mistaken.
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"And my dreams play a game
Of advance and retreat"
I thought this was a really creative line, and it sounded great.
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I really enjoyed the repitition of the 'Each' phrases in the last stanza, and thought the poem ended very well. The rhyme scheme was very unobtrusive.

"Each life has a path
Each day has a place
Each smile brings in joy
Across a longing face"

^^^^^^^
I LOVE IT!!!! no other words to describe it, it's really amazing :D