Great poem, it was very well written and captivating, i defiantly enjoyed it.5 for an amazing piece of writing.

I just need to let you know,
That you will always own my heart,
Although shattered and broken
You'll carry it, all torn apart....
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this stanza was soooo touchy!!!
I hope you're okay hun~~
your poem was amazing and I admired the repetition of the line "its over" in every stanza!
again hope things turn to be Okay!
Luv
NemO x0x0x0x0x

0h huni this was really t0uching very deep and p0werful. i like the structure 0f it th0ugh h0pe ur 0rite. g0od j0b expressing urself.

l0ve fr0m
d0ra

I can 1000000% relate to that poem
That poem was Amazing
Excellenty Written
Fantastic Ryhme And Flow
It was just aoeuajnguoenouen poem
see i cant even think of a word

Magnificent Job
100000/5
~TPOMH~

Such a great poem, i don't know what to say, because it's too great!!!!!

That is the most awesomist poem i have read al day!
it really made me sad since me and my boyfriend jus broke up 2 days ago!
i was so sad,well anyways i know u dont want to hear bout my stupid probs lol
well i guess i wil let u go!
plz return the fav....love ya bye!

I liked it a lott..ur words rocked me inside..its awesom..so perfect masterpiece..keep up da good work..5/5 wish you all da best......

Wow. I love this. I really really reallly love this.

This poem was really good.. very sad.. You did a great job with expressing your emotions. I loved it!

Hey..this is really good...itz absolutely amazing how you worded this...i love it...i've been thru the exact same thing...hopefully you can get over him...and i know that i have someone who will alwayz have part of my heart...no matter what...but take care, great job
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Omg i can relate to it.. its an amazing poem. i love it. ur an amazing writer.. it is sad.. but wow words cant even describe how amazing that poem is..

This poem is playing my tune and singing my own story. I wish I knew somehow to rescue my heart from his horrible grasp and set my soul free. I really felt this poem, thank you from posting it hun. It meant a lot to me.

-Tainted

Hey! Aww this is a really good poem! I loved it! Awesome! It's a 5/5 for sure! Keep writing . . .
*Just Lisa*

I love your poem!
keep up the great work in writting poems..

Amazing... wow, I love the way you write. This is simply flawless!!
xoxo
♥ -nik

I loved your poem I can completely relate to it.

Omg omg omg.. So good. it was really sad. and i no exactly that feeling. And it hurts..:( But the poem was soo good i absolutely loved it

The last section was the best part of the entire thing. i really really like the way you actually seem to know what your doing. you had an actual poetic device in your poem [repetition] and it doesnt seem like you were just throwing words down and calling it a poem. it was good. and the rhyme was good. [although in a few parts you strechted your words too far trying to make the rhythm work]

good tho!! :]

Damn mamii!!!
Love hurtts like helllll!!!!
WE all been through, I changed ma name, Im beautifuldissater
Its good to see a Boricua repin in poetry
YOou go mamii, we proud
Holla :)
xkitty24x@hotmail.com

Gosh I absoluetly luv it!I admire your writing so much!! I hope I can write like you some day, lol. I'm kinda new at this stuff, so feel free to give me advice on any of my writing!! thx