by Kylead          May 8, 2006
    
        category :
            Life, society /
            about society
            
    
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            In this garden of my life   | 
by SashaMirage
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 That was very beautiful. I love the metaphor of your life being like a rose. I wrote a similar poem but I didn't post it yet. keep writing. ~sasha~  | 
by Iris
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 This poem was well written. sound like everyday life to me...with all suffering and dying. Keep up the good work!!  | 
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 This piece is really good, the used the metaphor of being a flower very well, it is very effective. You wrote this very well with some clearly well portrayed content, it has much depth yet retains an idea of simplicity. Overall a well written peice  |