Summer Love

by TeenXLoveXTragedy   May 10, 2006


As the rain falls from the sky
and lands on our skin
I\'m sure this is a crime
this is the perfect sin

you gently reach over
and grab my hand tight
i can't imagine what i\'ve done
to be here with you tonight

you lift my hand up
and give it a soft kiss
my heart is beating faster now
im not sure im ready for this

nows the real deal
i taste your lips so sweet
as your tounge touches mine
i feel my heart skip a beat

butterflies in my stomach
hair wet with rain
if this is really love
we\'ve got so much to gain

we walk back to your car
hand in hand once more
i see your sweet smile
as you open up the door

your just a summer romance
not true love at all
but tonight you are my prince
and we\'re headed to a Ball

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hiya T.L.T,
    A lovely romantic story. You have expressed yourself well. In my humble opinion it could do with tweaking with, just to help it flow a bit better.
    Still, great job 5/5
    Michael

  • 16 years ago

    by Emma B

    Aww so cute.

    there's a little tinge of sadness with the whole 'it's not true love' deal but i like it a lot!

  • 16 years ago

    by JanaeNae

    Ah! this is so adorable...i love it...!!!
    really nice flow...and it paints such a pretty picture of the thrill of a summer lover! nice job, 5/5!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Airika

    I really like it..

  • 16 years ago

    by Sparks

    Excellent i liked the last stanza the most.