Broken Memories

by TeenXLoveXTragedy   Oct 20, 2007


*This is a poem i started that i dont know if its worht finishing or not..please comment and tell me your opinions*

The day her world came crashing down
her heart lay broken on the ground
he sister told her never again
she was no longer her best friend

the tears roll from her eyes all day
silently she starts to pray
"help her remember the fun we had,
Let her know that I"m not mad"

Sixteen years right by my side
always truthful, never lied
anything or anywhere
there was no doubt that she'd be there

she found a guy and dropped it all
from there our friendship started to fall
sisters, sure but friends, not quite
she cries herself to sleep each night

to be continued..eventually

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  • 16 years ago

    by emILY

    Keep Going ! I love your poems, great meter and rhythm in all of them! ^^'

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Hey...i want the rest! i definitely think you should finish it!

  • 16 years ago

    by BrokenVodkaBottle

    Good keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by I Love You Dominick

    Umm yes you need to keep goin i love it!! its amazing!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Emma

    Hey Hun! PLs continue!! Its gr8 keep goin I relate very wel :)