Comments : I Swear I Will

  • 17 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    ... A feeling we've all happened to come across I'm sure. There is nothing worse than having words in your heart that you cannot utter. This poem defines that statement. A beautiful write, but please... DO TELL HIM :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Cuddles

    Simon, I promise nothing except that I'll try.

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Wow Mary! I really LOVED it!! It had a great flow to it, and a lot of emotion.
    You are very very VERY talented!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Princess Love

    Hmmm.... a tough situation to be in. And its worst when you know that you gotta let him know soooooon. Yeah, sooooo know the feeling, been there done that. Well, all I can say is that just shoot right at him, you got nothing to lose. And once you've said it, you'll see how light it feels to get it off your chest. Good luck hun!

    Great poem as usual, absolutely loved it!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cuddles

    It's in the sadness section because there's just a lot about this situtation that's laying hard on me right now. I couldn't put them in the poem. That would have made it a book. *smiles*

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Great job on this.. I could really relate to it. The flow & rhythm was really good.. Great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow.. that was very good, im sure everyone could probably relate to that.. and your feelings really came thru strong! keep up the excellent work!
    jessy

  • 17 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    Don i felt that you were more talking to chatting than writing a poem. it was a bit confused .

    all the best

  • This Poem Reminds Me Of Me And My Current Boyfriend, I Know I'm Going To Have To Break It Off With Him Soon But Goodbye Is The Hardest Word In The English Language, Because It Hurts The Worst Expecially When You Care About Somebody The Way I Do About Him...I Can Relate & I Love Poems I Can Relate To 5/5 Definatley *Smooches* xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Tasha

    This poem is cute

  • 17 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    Dear,
    am with the poem bcoz he won't tell unless you tell. though this poem is confused and made me nervous ,yet i got the message.

    all the best