Dancing in the Rain

Awesome poem girl! It's so good-spirted, it makes people realize that rainy days aren't that terrible. You made this poem funny in some parts, like the,"But the clouds were to busy taking a leak" hehe, nice work!! 5/5 <3

~Loveless Nights~

Great poem..reminded me of being a little kid..but I never got to play in the rain...sigh...My favorite part was "But the clouds were to busy taking a leak"..That line made me laugh..Nice touch..5/5
Tyanna

This poem is really good, I love the rain, and every poem that talks about rain. I liked how you related raining with happiness and fun.

Good job! 5/5

I liked this- but felt you could work a bit more on the great subject matters and ideas you've got. One way of doing this could be the rhyme which although was great in some places often sounded just a little forced. Sometimes you don't have/can't rhyme to get the right effect. Nevertheless this was a very good poem and i like the ambiguity of the last line. Good Work

Sondos

Haha. That's so cute, and true. You're NEVER to old to jump in puddles. :D

Great Poem.