DEATH

I wish you didn't feel this way, but I guess you're entightled to your thoughts. I hope you see soon the plans that are laid out for you!! 5/5, and as was already said, keep your head up!!
In my thoughts and prayers,
Kristen
horsefeathers90@yahoo.com

I think the words came from you heart

but you sound like a very tatlanted young girl who needs to live just to wright poems

i loved the poem and it made me sad
feeling emotions when reading poems is they best way to read them

well done
5/5
try and keep your head up grl

lana

Hey it's paula read and commment rate whatever mine please thnks by the way i think that poem was really good and it came straight from the heart thats awesome
seeya
paula

I have felt the same way many times before so I can not bring myself to scold you to hard but you must promise me one thing, that you will be here when I come back and I promise that I will come back I will miss your comments, poems, and e-mails while I am gone

-goodbye Cody

You let yourself feel to much
Great poem though.